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Multani
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This is my poem for English. I'm no poet, like ademis22, but any insight, and constructive critisism is greatly appreciated.
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The Death of Religion
They there's a heaven
far above the sky;
Angels dance and God resides.
And there's also a hell
where horrors lie;
Demons prance and Lucifer presides.
Many think God created the Earth
in six days.
They say he shaped with mirth
the land in many ways.
But the world sees no heaven or hell.
It says science and logic, empowers us all.
-John Dong
in response to
The Horrid Voice of Science
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Moderators: Please close this thread by Nov. 8th as by then, this thread will be irrelevant.
The Death of Religion
They there's a heaven
far above the sky;
Angels dance and God resides.
And there's also a hell
where horrors lie;
Demons prance and Lucifer presides.
Many think God created the Earth
in six days.
They say he shaped with mirth
the land in many ways.
But the world sees no heaven or hell.
It says science and logic, empowers us all.
-John Dong
in response to
The Horrid Voice of Science
Comments, flames. Post 'em